Then the hits: "Rock Lobster" is a song title, so skip. "Scored hits like..." "Scored" could be "achieved|obtained|secured." "Hits" might be "successes|popular songs|top tracks."
Continuing with The Police section: "This British trio brought reggae-infused New Wave to the masses with hits like “Roxanne,” “Message in a Bottle,” and “Every Breath You Take.”" Proper noun is "The Police" and others. "This" becomes "This|That|The". "British trio" changes to "UK group|British ensemble|British trio". "Brought" to "Introduced|Presented|Delivered". "Reggae-infused New Wave" becomes "Reggae-inspired New Wave|New Wave with reggae|Infused reggae and New Wave". "To the masses" can be "To the public|To wide audiences|To the populace". The rest follows similarly with synonyms. new wave music 80s hits
Final paragraph: "New Wave’s Mainstream Breakthrough" Then the hits: "Rock Lobster" is a song title, so skip