"Increase functionality" – "improve" in the first paragraph could be elevate? The sentence says "improve the computer’s functionality". So replace "improve" with enhance?
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"Cause" synonyms: induce. "Crashes" might be breakdowns. "Render" could be convert. hp compaq 8000 elite sff pc bios update